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Mateusz Wowk
Age: 26Gender: Male
School: Academy of Art and Design in Wroclaw
Course: Transportation Design
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Mateusz Wowk in response to Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 13:43
Yes, I'll do as you say, thank you very much. I hope in the next competition I will go better.
Mateusz Wowk 4th Sep 2012 | 13:11
No offense to You mr. Beyer. I think is little too late for any help. The Competition has ended 2 days ago.
18Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 12:47
I don`t see any cutline of the door opening. How does the door open anyway. Do you have a new concept? ( sliding,controvento, lift up.....)
17Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 12:44
The taillamp could be more precise. Slim down the lamp and give it mayby a more 3D environment ( champher )
16Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 12:42
Question: Is the highlited surface meant to be a chrome/metal insert. If yes, I would work it out as a more premium execution. Control the linework a bit more. It looks to sketchy and edgy.
14Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 12:38
Slim down the pillar in the front and let it grow towards the rear end. ( Thick to thin ) that builds up more dynamic and drama
13Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 12:36
Hi Mateusz
The idea with the motherboard is not too bad. But I would keep the excution simple. Less is more.
Your images have improved. In particular this last image. The feature on the hood is mayby to much. If you insist I would try to simplify it a bit.
12Mateusz Wowk 23rd Aug 2012 | 10:12
Dear mr. Beyer
I realize that it is already late to look for new inspiration, but I think this one is good. I'm still trying to connect sculptural artistry and german precision. Computers are very precise and modern so I decided to use the computers motherboard texture as the lamps and safety sensors. It also highlights the nature of ampera. I remember that you wrote to me to clean up the graphics, but maybe it's a different story now. Please let me know if I'm wrong. Also I would like to know my sketches are sofisticated and dynamic enough.
If You don't like the new idea i will go back to the older version.
I would be very grateful for your reply
Mateusz Wowk 13th Aug 2012 | 11:35
Dear mr. Beyer
thank you very much for your feedback. I decided to keep the one box design as you like it and I have tried to put some boomerang shape to the front.
Is it a good way to develop the project?
In the next step i would like to develop some details
9Kurt Beyer 8th Aug 2012 | 15:05
Interessting graphics. Still the rear is too busy. Keep the graphic, but calm it down a bit.
7Kurt Beyer 8th Aug 2012 | 15:01
Too complicated. Clean it down. Give also the graphics more dynamism.
6Kurt Beyer 8th Aug 2012 | 14:59
The DLO is always a keep element for a brand. It has brand function. So think about how you execute the window graphic. Look at current Opel products and come up with a solution how it could like in the future. What is the next level or step??
5Kurt Beyer 8th Aug 2012 | 14:56
Great that you try to implement the boomerang graphic into the front. To me the grphic looks a bit edgy. Try to get a bit more flow and dynamic into the graphic execution.Also the surfaces around the lamp area is a bit to busy. Calm it down and make it more simpler.
Also try to find a connection to the bodyside or vice vers.
I like the one box design.
3Mateusz Wowk 20th Jul 2012 | 14:52
Hi.
First of all, I would like to thank the jury for shortlisting me. In the last article concluding the juries proceedings, I read that my project should be backed up by inspirations, which is why I have attached my story-board of about 2020 ampera. I would be very grateful for any guidance concerning my project as I feel that at this point I have become stuck and am not sure what I should focus on most. Thank you.
Kind Regards
4Kurt Beyer in response to Mateusz Wowk 8th Aug 2012 | 14:48
Hi Mateusz
First congratulations to your step into the next level. I am your mentor and will try to give you some comments to your work to help improving and further developing your project.
You`ve done so far a very impressive work development. Great job. Looking at your exterior and interior work, I feel that the interior is a bit stronger than the exterior. But with some tweaks a bit here and there the exterior will become equaly.
The interior looks a bit more sporty and dynamic. More like a sportscar. You should start cleaning up the graphics and surfaces to get the car a bit more sofisticated. Think about sculptural artistry meets german precision. Keep this phrases always in your mind.I will add some tags to describe what I`m talking about
2Uno_Mars 10th May 2012 | 15:23
Nice Sketches! Particularly like this rear end! Looking forward to your final proposal!
1VictorJRomeroDesign 10th May 2012 | 1:25
Hi Mateusz! I like this front and rear solutions. Very Opel, and interesting. Good luck!
Alpha One 4th May 2012 | 21:37
Very good job. I like your materialsm, looks very futuristic. Keep it up!
the designer 4th May 2012 | 13:30
Very nice work, I realy like your car - Its Simple and futuristic, clean design and looks like an ampera. Good job.
I only thing I cant figure out is that - what was your theme behind this car or what led you to make this nice car. Any form, Inspiration etc......
Mateusz Wowk in response to the designer 9th May 2012 | 11:58
Thanx:) I was studying a couple of books and magazines to have a better understanding of the Opel/vauxhall design style. I concentrated on the Opel brand itself so that I could predict how it would look in 8 years time.
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Kurt Beyer 4th Sep 2012 | 13:28
No Problem
But you still can consider to work my comments in. I guess that you will put your work into your Portfolio, right?
In general your sketches have improved. Keep going. You are on a very good way.